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greysolace Member
since 2006-03-27
Posts 71 |
Do I? I don’t like him Do I? I don’t think about him Do I? Longing to talk to him again, To have the conversations we had again, Is surely not something I do Is it? Worrying about him Wanting to be there to comfort him Is obviously not something I do Is it? Wishing to sit next to him To enjoy his proximity Is definitely not something I want Is it? Do I wish there was something more Something other than this friendship of ours? Is this the question that haunts me? The question that rules my sleeping hours? No, it cannot be For the question that torments me is Does he? ~~Poetry is written emotion~~ |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
I liked this alot. I loved how you ended it. great job. ~heather Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Wow! The ending was kind of suprising for me but I agree with Heather in liking it. It puts a neat kind of twist into the poem that makes it interesting, yet, it keeps it on track. GrEaT job with this poem! It was a pleasure to read  @-->--- |
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