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Teen Poetry #7

Belief in Love

greysolace
Member

since 2006-03-27

Posts 71

0 posted 2006-08-01 04:32 PM

Belief in Love

What’s it like to be in love?
What’s that feeling everyone talks about
But I have yet to experience?
I seem to be the only one without someone
So I’m the one they call “lonely”

They say it’s an awesome feeling
To be in love
To have someone whom you care for above all else
And to know that the feeling is mutual
To know that there is always a pair of warm arms to return to
And someone to be everything to you
But I wouldn’t know
For love doesn’t know me

So I’m left to wonder
Who my “reason to live” is
Who will I spend eternity with
Who have I been praying for
Who this enigma they call “love” is
I’m left with only the belief that I will know him someday
And be his everything
While he is everything to me

I hope to find love one day
Though he is being rather elusive at the moment
I will not give up faith
For happiness comes to those who believe

And I’m a believer

~~Poetry is written emotion~~
greysolace

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

1 posted 2006-08-01 09:13 PM

hey
have you post this poem on another site. I think I reconize it from somewhere.
I thought you did a great job on this poem.
I hope to see more in the future from you.

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

2 posted 2006-08-02 01:49 AM

Hi greysolace,

Amazing write! I like how it kind of starts out sad with "where is my love?" yet builds you up towards the end. Gives the poem a feeling of hope, of waiting expectantly and knowing what you are waiting for is coming. Excellent job with this poem.

The ending two lines, I think it's two, have to be my favorite, especially where you say, "and I’m a believer" to me that was just an awesome way to put an ending to your poem. Kind of wraps the whole poem together with a strong ending.

Great job on this poem, it was a pleasure to read

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