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waltz... or swing
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waltz... or swing |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533
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The delicate sound of the piano plays softly as we dance We box and do three step hand in hand The intricate dance of the almighty waltz causes my feet to mane many faults My partner just laughs as I keep messing up By the umpth time I fall I decide to just stop Jacob my partner smiles into my eyes, then puts his head back and laughs at my many wasted tries I guess this dance wasn't set out for me I better just stick with the great dance of Swing hahaha okay i was bored and my friend Jacob taught me how to dance yesterday- the waltz and swing. Its actually the opposite though- I sucked at swing and did great at the waltz. so i made a lousy random poem of it : ) |
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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513 |
I LOVED THIS! I don't know what it is about it that I liked so much but it was GREAT!!!! I can relate too! yes, the waltz is hard until you get it BUT SWING IS SO MUCH FUN!!! Leigh |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
lol... Great poem bekah! I feel like pen&paper on this though, don't know exactly what you are talking about, but all in all finding this to be an enjoyable read! Rather funny really, I like both the swing and the waltz but i'm better at salsa? Wow... That's way off subject! lolz Thanks for sharing!  @-->--- |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
hahaha thanks guys : ) |
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