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buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

0 posted 2006-07-31 10:55 AM

(this is kind of a private poem, but i decided i would post it. only read it if you really want to, b/c its kind of a shock at the end. don't skip ahead though)
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its been a while
but i still get butterflies
when i hear your name
but the joy is fleeting
cause right after that comes pain
(it hurts)

64 days
yes i've been counting
since you called me "mae"
i won't ever let anyone else call me that
in wouldn't be the same
(trust me)

why i let you in
i wonder
time and again
i know i shouldn't have done it
it seems love should be a sin
(isn't it?)

you gace me a reason
to believe "love at first sight"
but it was also you
who made me believe
i never again want to concieve
(your child)

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

1 posted 2006-07-31 04:46 PM

Well I think it was pretty good I guess although it didn't really rhyme with anything but other then that your writing was pretty good. And thanx for sharing, even though it's a private.

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

2 posted 2006-07-31 05:38 PM

well, it was about me..having a bad relationship. and getting pregnant, but i guess its hard to get..sorry

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2006-08-01 02:28 PM

Thanks for sharing this with us, it’s a hard thing to do I know, posting something so private for all the world to read and stare…

Just rememember if you ever need someone to talk to or anything, I'm sure that everyone on pip would be willing to listen...

I hope that everything turns out for the better for you in the end, or near future.

Thanks for sharing

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rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

4 posted 2006-08-06 01:35 PM

i really liked that poem, very good. that is a schock at the end.

i hope life starts to lighten up for you.

yours truly
rhia

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2006-08-09 09:27 PM

that was good.....i'm sorry for what happened to you. that was a shock for me at the end too. but thanx for sharing your personal poem with us
Krysti*

A true friend is someone who reaches for your hand and touches your
heart.

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