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Artofmark
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since 2006-07-12
Posts 41


0 posted 2006-07-29 01:48 PM



Diamonds gleem brilliantly
Gold has the luster of twenty suns
Pearls smooth and shine brightly
For these are nothing to shun

Ruby's how beautiful
With the colors of rose
A gift how thoughful
But with this, love does show?

This is the question,I bring to you
Rubys, Emerald, Diamond, o so bright
Red, green, or even blue
For this is my delight?
No gift greater than you

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stargal
Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352
OR USA
1 posted 2006-07-31 08:54 AM


Hey ArtofMark,

Awesome poem! I loved the comparisons between jewels and a person. It was very interesting. Because jewels are so beautiful and comparing them to people is a compliment in it's own? I'm not sure what I'm talking about, it's early, forgive me for babbling.

What i'm trying to say is I enjoyed your poem a lot. It was a beautiful read.

Thank you for sharing

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cherrys_rule
Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

2 posted 2006-07-31 04:50 PM


I have to agree with Stargal,
Your poem was very nice written. It was very good of comparing jewels to a person. I love your poem. I hope to see more of them in the future.

Artofmark
Junior Member
since 2006-07-12
Posts 41

3 posted 2006-08-01 11:53 AM


thank you very much, I do not know how I thought of this is just sounded right
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