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Teen Poetry #7

away from myself

synthetic
Member

since 2006-06-10

Posts 70
ontario, canada

0 posted 2006-07-24 08:36 PM

So tell me where you've gone to
why you left without warning
and if you're ever coming back.

It took me a while to admit to myself
you actually walked away
and had your back turned from my face.

I had the time I needed, so you said.
I didn't make the right choice.
You left me hurt without the option to heal.
You left me without choice.

So tell me what's out there for you
why I wouldn't be able to make it up.
Show me what there is to do.

I need you forever
that's the long and short
this mission they sent me on was planned without abort.

I didn't see the signs until the breaks weren't working.
I didn't see your pain until your heart closed the door.
You didn't see my desire until you saw me at your window.
Heaven's gate is guarded I'm the one at the door.

Head down arms up my hopes have been arrested
You've jailed my ambitions
Barred my pathway from reaching your soul.

Instead of finding a place for me
you built up walls around yourself
built me up to let me down.

I keep attempting to find your passions.
I keep finding myself passionately lost.
You make your way into my mind.
You make me wander away from your thoughts.

It's clear you think of me still
like we remained in yesterday
I'll surpass the goods of the past.

It's shady the way I think of you still
like we remained in yesterday
let me rewrite our future in lengths that'll last.

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

1 posted 2006-07-25 08:32 PM

this was excellent! I love your work! I hope to see more by you.

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

2 posted 2006-07-25 10:27 PM

I AGREE!! great job..

~heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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