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rhia_5779
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since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334
California

0 posted 2006-07-09 02:08 PM


i am going to go to  italy to live abroad for a year. and i m gonna miss my friend alot!!!!!.  

i wrote this like month a go and just found it
I can’t believe it; I will miss you all so much
As deep as it goes, this pain can barely touch
my memories, the fun times, this past year
times I laughed, times I cried, all those tears
each smile, special moments, time spent among friends
time spent making promises to each other until the end
teasing, joking, all the drama, every crisis
bad times all the good, the turns and twists
made up a part of our 6th grade class
I think and remember, my year, the last
When I come back, 8th grade here I come
To spend one last year, a year not to be outdone
One like no other I’ m sure it will be
No longer will it be I, but us and we
Our class I wonder how it will grow
When I leave, what changes  will be made I don’t know
, Curious and a little sad, but Excited all the while
to see whom they are, when I get back on my face, a smile
back where I am happy, back with my friends.
During that year, looking back, yet forward again,
as that year beginnings become ends.

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stargal
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since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352
OR USA
1 posted 2006-07-10 12:08 PM


Hey Rhia,

It sounds like you have a lot in store for you! I know how hard it is to move away from all of your friends, yet at least you can come back... Italy is lots of fun too, I'm sure you'll meet new people and see interesting things...

I'm not really sure what to say, I have no critiques or anything... I hope that everything goes good for you... Maybe, just good luck with this coming year?

Thanks for posting once again, i'd love to hear more from you

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cherrys_rule
Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

2 posted 2006-07-25 08:48 PM


I had a best friend that moved from Florida to Colorado. 3,000 miles away from me. I was going through some dark stages back then, and so was she. I felt worse for her b/c she was leaving all her friends, and I was only losing one. so I kibdda know what your going through, but the oppisite. But I hope you meet some knew friends and they treat you better then all your other friends did. Plus the good thing about technoligy is that you can still keep in touch.
Other then all that your poem was really good

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