Teen Poetry #7 |
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i will miss you |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
i am going to go to italy to live abroad for a year. and i m gonna miss my friend alot!!!!!. i wrote this like month a go and just found it I can’t believe it; I will miss you all so much As deep as it goes, this pain can barely touch my memories, the fun times, this past year times I laughed, times I cried, all those tears each smile, special moments, time spent among friends time spent making promises to each other until the end teasing, joking, all the drama, every crisis bad times all the good, the turns and twists made up a part of our 6th grade class I think and remember, my year, the last When I come back, 8th grade here I come To spend one last year, a year not to be outdone One like no other I’ m sure it will be No longer will it be I, but us and we Our class I wonder how it will grow When I leave, what changes will be made I don’t know , Curious and a little sad, but Excited all the while to see whom they are, when I get back on my face, a smile back where I am happy, back with my friends. During that year, looking back, yet forward again, as that year beginnings become ends. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hey Rhia, It sounds like you have a lot in store for you! I know how hard it is to move away from all of your friends, yet at least you can come back... Italy is lots of fun too, I'm sure you'll meet new people and see interesting things... I'm not really sure what to say, I have no critiques or anything... I hope that everything goes good for you... Maybe, just good luck with this coming year? Thanks for posting once again, i'd love to hear more from you ![]() @-->--- |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
I had a best friend that moved from Florida to Colorado. 3,000 miles away from me. I was going through some dark stages back then, and so was she. I felt worse for her b/c she was leaving all her friends, and I was only losing one. so I kibdda know what your going through, but the oppisite. But I hope you meet some knew friends and they treat you better then all your other friends did. Plus the good thing about technoligy is that you can still keep in touch. Other then all that your poem was really good |
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