Teen Poetry #7 |
reaching up |
buckysimone Junior Member
since 2003-10-19
Posts 27 |
reaching up my hands for the sky. the ship slowly submerges gallons of water pour through my mouth holding my breath. minutes and hours pass through the rushing fury blinded by the salt bleeding fingernails burning eyes. thrusting my arms against the current darkness subsides in my eyes i see it all. on top of the world screaming at the top of my lungs sharing with the world i’m reaching up |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
I liked this. Good job. I soak up all the pain, and accept it in silence~DMX |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
hmmm...it was pretty good....hmmm...some of the lines were too broken up for me though...so i dunno. now im alone, but not lonely like before |
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