Teen Poetry #7 |
Remembering |
Baby_Angel123 Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 63Unity, ME |
Remembering Only in this world, for barely six months, and yet you have touched, the hearts of all of us. For these tears the you see, as you watch down upon us, are not tears of sadness, buttears of joy. Joy of all the memories, in which you have gavin us, to keep in our hearts, as we remember you. So I guess the only thing, that’s lefts to say, is we love you, and we’ll see you at the gates, when it is our time, to play with you, yet once again. Dedicated to Tyler Joseph Kelly 2/22/03~9/8/03. Always fight for what you believe in! [This message has been edited by Baby_Angel123 (09-28-2003 10:28 AM).] |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
this one was pretty good. i straight up liked the whole dedication thing. try and explore ways to make this a bit more in depth though, but still a great job done. |
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magic_612 Member
since 2003-07-31
Posts 190NB, Canada |
this was sooo sad.. almost brought a tear to my eye. I like how you said your tears are not just of sadness, but of joy. I agree with you there, even though something is taken from us, the memories can last a lifetime. Thanks for sharing. |
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Baby_Angel123 Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 63Unity, ME |
Thanks for your replies! ~Angel~ |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
sniffle sniffle |
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monkey Junior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 27 |
awww! this was such an awesome poem! i loved it even tho it was very sad. |
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Devils Angel 666 Member
since 2001-11-30
Posts 71CT, USA |
Good poem babe... It's a good thing that I decides to come on here and take a look cuz I know you weren't going to tell me lol! Good poem again babe and I do agree with the first person in the replys list. |
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Ally Stone Junior Member
since 2003-10-20
Posts 48D.C. |
Tissue alert!! Wow, I need this like I need Romeo and Juliet...and I was in such a happy mood! Good write by the way, especially the first bit. ---A--- |
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broken627 Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 66Eugene Oregon |
i want to say goodbye to you but i cant your not here to say it to just give me something so i can be set free i know theres no chance of there being another u and me i dont think you know the impact youve had on me all i can do is sit with a blank stare knowing that when i look at my phone your name wont be there so i took advantage of your love for me just give me a chance...one more i know you dont need me or even want me but there is one thing i need to tell you before this us thing is tossed out the window completly if i ask you sweetly will you return to me |
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broken627 Member
since 2003-11-26
Posts 66Eugene Oregon |
woops i totally posted that in the wrong spot i meant to send that this was a beautiful poem it definetly made me cry! keep on writing! -*-Broken627-*- |
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