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A TRIBUTE TO SOME CLOSE FRIENDS OF MINE
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A TRIBUTE TO SOME CLOSE FRIENDS OF MINE |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
ALEXANDRIA AL~ *Strong, EX~ *Standing proud AN~ *Doesn’t draw back DR~ *A fighter, not challenged I~ *Picks her fights so carefully A~ *I need help. And she helps DANA D~ *Sweet, ^^^^^Really decent A~ *Kind, loving funny N~ *Rarely hurts other people ^^^^^^Intentionally, a friend to everyone A~ *Makes us all laugh, easygoing relaxed DIANA D~ *Confused I ~ *And bewildered A~ *It seems, complex N~ *How to understand her A~ *Tells me things, so blunt ^^^^^^^Sometimes things I don’t wanna hear EVE E~ *Rivals ^^^^^^Once, now V~ *We are different ^^^^^^Close friends, trust ourselves E~ *Best friends, our friendship special ^^^^^^^Brought closer, events that broke us MAYA M~ *Intellectual, A ~ *My friend ^^^^^^^^Different than us Y~ *Has an exceptional mind ^^^^^^^^Is amazing, how she deals A~ *With us all, she is observitive MILLY M~ *Amazing I~ *True blue L~ *A loyal friend L~ *To her friends matter Y~ *She sticks up for friends ^^^^^^Always at my side when needed RASA R~ *Moody A~ *Always true ^^^^^A different girl S~ *Has true real courage ^^^^^^She and I lead lives alike A~ *Grown up so different , yet equivilent VICKI V~ *Laughing I~ *Big personality C~ * Cracks me up K~ * Keeps me humble, grounded I ~ * Just enough, a reminder needed ^^^^^^^Short attention span, funny , nice, friend \ [This message has been edited by rhia_5779 (06-30-2006 11:03 AM).] |
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latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
How....interesting. it's nice that you made a tribute to your friends....I don't really think this is a poem....Ummm....It could of been organized a little better. Jessica |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Umm, I thought that this was nice of you, as a friend, to write something to all of your friends you care about... I'm not sure what I think about the poem itself though, for me it was a little to disorganized, i mean the thing with the names was neat but it was hard to read in that form, no offence... I did like that you named all of your friends? That was kind of cool and the way you described each of them was how a real friend would... I know that your friends must be some really lucky people! Great write on this one, I hope to see more in the near future  @-->--- |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
YA WASNT REALLY MEANT TO B A POEM, SORRY. I TRIED TO FIX IT. IT ISN'T TAKING MY CORRECTIONS. I WAS TRYING TO PUT SPACES BETWEEN THE DIFFERENT SETS, AND MAKE IT MORE ORGANIZED, BUT I DONT THINK MY THING SHOWED UP. |
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