Love song for the one i hate

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drowningmonky
Junior Member

since 2006-03-02

Posts 14
miami, florida

0 posted 2006-06-28 04:32 AM

Ill do unto you what you have done to me.
Revenge is sweet,
Mines is arriving soon.
So run from this hell
you brought it upon yourself.

cause baby you meant the world to me
was it so hard for you to see
I was willing to give up everything
just as long as you stayed with me
just as long as you didnt play with me.
why are you still so blind to not see
what you have given up so easily.

Used me as a toy
soon you will be asking for more
drinking every last drop of me
suffocating me till theirs nothing left of me
Why is it so hard for you to see
I have always been there in your times of need
and i have remained even when you have stepped all over me.

cause baby you meant the world to me
was it so hard for you to see
I was willing to give up everything
just as long as you stayed with me
just as long as you didnt play with me.
why are you still so blind to not see
what you have given up so easily.

Im tired and im angry
im fluttered and im waiting
i want a piece of you
i want to bring you down
to crush you to the ground
cant wait to see you frown.

cause baby you meant the world to me
was it so hard for you to see
I was willing to give up everything
just as long as you stayed with me
just as long as you didnt play with me.
why are you still so blind to not see
what you have given up so easily.

AND IF MAYBE BY ANY CHANCE SHE DOESNT SATISFY UR NEEDS
AND U DECIDE TO COME CRAWLING BACK TO ME
YOU BETTER BOW DOWN TO ME AND RUN FOR BEING SELFISH, CRUEL, AND UNKIND,
MOST OF ALL FOR MAKING ME WASTE MY TIME.
CAUSE U ARENT WORTH A CENT OR A DIME
YOU HAVE ALWAYS FORGOTTEN ABOUT ME EXEPT WHEN IT COMES TO PLEASING UR FANTASIES. SO WHAT MAKES YOU THINK I WILL TAKE A SECOND GLANCE AND TAKE U BACK INTO MY LIFE. WHEN U MESSED UP EVERYTHING I SO NEATLY KEPT ORGANIZED.SAY GOODBYE DONT COME AGAIN
CAUSE NOW IT'S JUST TOO LATE.

[This message has been edited by drowningmonky (06-30-2006 10:48 PM).]

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

1 posted 2006-06-29 12:34 PM

Umm... wow? I'm not sure if this is based on things that are going on in your life right now but if they are I hope this song made you feel better? Being able to rant and get all of that rage out hopefully helped you to relax some...

I'm not really sure what to say, it was very bitter to me yet sad and ... I don't know! So many emotions in this song it's kind of making my head spin.

I loved this part though,

"Used me as a toy
soon you will be asking for more
drinking every last drop of me
suffocating me till theirs nothing left of me
Why is it so hard for you to see
I have always been there in your times of need
and i have remained even when you have stepped all over me."

and I guess I love this part because once I was able to relate to it, cause it happened to me also...

Umm, so this isn't one of my favorites by you but I still kind of liked it, cause like i said above, lots this I could actually relate rather well to at a certain time in my life...

Sorry, I don't seem to have much to say, it's nice to see you posting again and I hope you will continue to post more here

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the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

2 posted 2006-06-29 11:30 PM

Hey... I loved this.. It was awesome.. to me anyways.. this was my favorite part..

"
cause baby you meant the world to me
was it so hard for you to see
I was willing to give up everything
just as long as you stayed with me
just as long as you didnt play with me.
why are you still so blind to not see
what you have given up so easily."

Great job.. I liked the chorus becuase Like stargal said about her verse.. I can relate to this.. great great job..

I can feel the emotion you put into this poem..

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

oh_my_goshijustgotexcited
Member

since 2006-07-12

Posts 52
USA, IDAHO

3 posted 2006-07-14 01:10 AM

great job, i liked the chorus, or, repeating part, whatever you wanna call it, anyways it was a great write. you are very talented! you have a way of showing your emotions..very stongly
thanks and keep it up

Viola

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