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makeupstains
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since 2006-06-27
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0 posted 2006-06-27 11:17 PM


here's to all our old memories.
and the delight it brings me to watch them burn.
each letter of every broken promise
disappears into the starless night
the cards and pictures where our laughter rings through
take every smile with them as i finally leave what was left of us go.

i don't know any of you here.
i was a member here a long time ago.
about four years or so. back when i was
in eighth grade and i used to write all
the time.
now. i am a senior in highschool.
and. i just wandered back here tonight.
i still write. just not as much.
but when i do, it's a lot different than
how i used to write.
so i created a new username. and i might post
randomly. but. i thought i'd post this.
and just. read around. i've missed this place.


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with you
1 posted 2006-06-28 01:02 AM


so then, welcome home...
if you don't mind, what was your old username? I'd love to compare what you wrote before to how you write now...

I loved the poem by the way.

stargal
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since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352
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2 posted 2006-06-28 08:06 PM


Hey makeupstains,

Great poem! I loved it the emotions in it for me were captivating,yet kind of sad for me...

Anyway, I hope you continue to post "randomly" on here cause I'd love to see more of your work

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makeupstains
New Member
since 2006-06-27
Posts 7

3 posted 2006-06-28 10:52 PM


my old username was riley.
you may. remember me.<3

tapper798
Member
since 2003-07-20
Posts 353
My own world
4 posted 2006-07-06 04:56 PM


take every smile with them as i finally leave what was left of us go.

Loved this. Welcome back! Hope to hear more from you!

myspace username-beautiful_tragidy
I just want to find my way back to you...where love is strong and feels brand new.

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