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Teen Poetry #7

Pain of love

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2006-06-25 09:40 PM

The pain of love now has awoken,
Wearing the scars of lost love,
Hopelessly lost, walking aimlessly,
What play has love played?
This fair of sadness has now come to town,
My heart was alone yesterday,
And it is the same today,
My hope filled heart did not break,
But, my sanity has been spilled,

My lover is separated today,
Heart of mine is now forced, broken in a million pieces,
Unable to mend with any amount of time,
Holding the pieces in my hand, a freak of public ridicule i have become,

What breeze of time has flown past me?
My lover forever lost, and so are her memories,
From taking a chance to love, I bear the misery within,
What scream my love let out?
On what did I stumble upon now?

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

The Shadow in Blue
Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

1 posted 2006-06-25 10:08 PM

I enjoyed how you wrote on the theme of lost love and how it hurts to open up to said emotion, especially when it's gone. I can unfortunately relate to it. Good write though.

[This message has been edited by The Shadow in Blue (06-25-2006 10:44 PM).]

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

2 posted 2006-06-25 10:42 PM

I like how you discribed "The pain of love". I can kinda relate but not much. It flows very well. All of it just fits perfectly. Bravo.

                  Jessica

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