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Teen Poetry #7

Reflecting On Memory

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
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0 posted 2006-06-11 10:09 PM

Reflecting in the shadows
You try to see what went so wrong
Fear drove you to do these things
And now your life is gone

You sit alone and cold
Thinking about your past
Of how everything was perfect
But you knew it wouldnt last

Thinking about your life alone
It burdens you to feel
So you shut out all the world
You know the scars won't heal

Lost, confused, and broken
You say these prayers alone
You walk the street an outcast
With nowhere to call a home

Reflecting in the shadows
You try to see what went so wrong
Fear drove you to do these things
And now your life in gone

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

1 posted 2006-06-11 10:45 PM

I loved this very much.. it was so deep and I could feel the emotion.

good job.

~Heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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