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I have a question. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
this was written in two parts, remembering two different people. The first bit was about my old best friend, who was like a sister to me, but than she changed, for the bad, forgot me, than, when her new "friends" dropped her as soon almost they had picked her up, she remembered me and came back, hoping for sympathy. the second part is talking about an older girl who i was friends with for years, who sadly enough i did idolize, untill she went really over the line, insulting some of my best friends, horribly, and i blew. she treated me as if i was dirt, i just didnt realized it for a while, i talked to her , asked her to stop, she got at me, and said i was saying b.s. we aren't friends right now. I have a question, I must ask Tell me this, tell me fast Before I rise, and explode Give me my answer, have to know Are you the one Who hurt me deep? The one who went after, me in my sleep? Are you the one, who taunted me without stop? Never gave me a chance to pick up what I lost Are you the one who chases me, even as I run? The very same, who I hear about, and can’t help but believe Are you the one who is doing all this to me? Causing my misery, pain, fears The one who makes me mad, for whom I cry tears Of the closeness we once had, Before you broke us apart, before you got back Friends, we were, for you not enough You decided to go after everyone else too People I thought were behind us,out of our lives,used to make our life so tough You may have forgotten what they put us through Or maybe not, you just forgave, how could you have done? They would pick on me, to hurt you; they taunted anyone not as strong They did nothing good for you or me or anyone Before I stepped up and did something final, way too long When I eventually did it was almost too late. I was scared, not much else I can say It just got to a point that, I was to scared to wait To let someone know, and just leave, make them pay Why did you do this, you changed, I barely knew you anymore So they could ditch you when they no longer needed you, What for? They turned you against me, and then when they dropped you came crawling back to me In pride defacing, pretty slow retreat. You came right back and said you are sorry But hard to forget, the things you said, how you acted We tried to restore it, but couldn’t, no longer that close Guess nothing good lasts that long, only goes to show. Well, good job, now I’ve learned, how not to trust The way you acted especially to me Even your friends commented, in disgust You never cared, when I called for help, you were never able to see How much I needed someone, to be my friend, You never paid attention only caring about your own ends Why did you even try, coming up to me, try to befriend me What made you do this, when you weren’t able to carry it through, answer my plea? For a while I idolized you, don’t know why You never cared about me just made me cry You hit me where it hurt the most, dug deep inside When we were together you always made me fight For what should have been mine Already, the respect that comes with friendship You showed such disregard, always tried to define For me How my other friends should be, How I needed to pretend When all I wanted Was to be your friend Somehow I doubt you even cared, always told me how I was unwanted. Well I give up, I am way too tired Half of it is none of your business, yet you meddle I no longer want to try to be someone I’m not, that shouldn’t be required All of this years ago should have been settled. |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
I really like this one by you. It shows everything that's in your heart. Good job And KEEP UP THE AWSOME WORK!!! |
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