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My Best friend is gone
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My Best friend is gone |
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girlskater117 Junior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 32 |
Im not suicideal just to tell my readers That. Life has ended for my frind... and it's not going away... It's not like it's the end of her days... so keep your paryers in a safe place... Why dose she have to cry.... over the simple thing you say... So life has ended for my frind .... It's the end of the day... and it's time for her to go to a peacefull place.... |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Okay, so i kind of like this one, it's different from a lot of things i've read lately, so yeah, it's nice... The only thing i really don't understand would be this line, "so keep your paryers in a safe place...", I'm not sure what that means, how that relates to the poem... once again could i get an explanation?  Stargal PS- I really did like this one by you, i'm just a little bit dense on some of the stuff... @-->--- |
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poise_and_rationality Junior Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 46my mind |
not to be nasty but i think you should read this to yourself outloud and see if you understand it as i agree with stargal also you need to read it again and correct some spelling mistakes Par |
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