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The best of friends
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The best of friends |
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stuck_in_a_dreaM New Member
since 2006-06-07
Posts 8 |
They never could be mad at each other, They just never could. They always were laughing together, just like best friends should. They always werer together, No matter what the day. They always understood each other, since they were both the same. They were just like sisters, Their spirits were alike They never could be parted Like how day is from the night You are my Best friend, And I just want you to know That I'm always here beside you Where ever you may go. My best friend is Bekah ( This Is her Best friend Coley Speaking ) I love you Bekahlekah45! [This message has been edited by stuck_in_a_dreaM (06-07-2006 08:59 PM).] |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hey Coley, Awesome first post! I enjoyed it immensely. I loved how you it seemed detached at first, like you weren’t even talking about you and your best friend and than how the ending stanza brings it together, very cool. Anyway, just so you know you have one spelling error in the second stanza you might like to fix… Once again welcome to pip! I can’t wait to see more writes from you  @-->--- |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Welcome to Passions!!!!!!!!!  Please check your e-mail for a special greeting. "... the rest is silence" |
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stuck_in_a_dreaM New Member
since 2006-06-07
Posts 8 |
thank you stargal! |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
cool write. very seldom do i catch people writing about the people that positively influence their lives(might just be missing others but eh...) but i enjoyed the read. Welcome to PiP " Everytime he held you close, yea were you thinking of me..." Stab My Back-All American Rejects |
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