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Teen Poetry #7

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cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

0 posted 2006-06-07 05:13 PM

Short I know but it just came to me. Hope you like it even though it's 6 lines.

Look deep
Look deep into me.
What do you see?
Deeper-into my eyes.
Do you despise?
Would you walk away or would you stay?

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

1 posted 2006-06-07 07:16 PM

Well, it's okay, it's not one of my favorites by you though... And it's not because it is short, but because it just isn't? lol... Sorry, I like the first part though, like the first 3 lines.

Thanks for posting again, it's been a long time no see

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