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the_girl_next_door
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since 2006-02-26
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0 posted 2006-06-03 10:43 PM


Two friends sit and talk
about their childhood dreams,
and how they loved to goof around,
only yesterday it seems.

Talking about the times,
of cooties and love bugs.
Times when they did wrong,
and only anwered with shoulder shrugs.

Then everything leads up
to where they're standing now,
and trying to explain life,
if only they knew how.

They wished they were little again,
one boy, one girl, two lollipops,
chinese checkers, friendship rings,
jumpropes and hopscotch.

A smile, a tear,
a hug, a stare,
knowing that your dearest friend,
will always be there.

Two friends sit and talk,
about everything in life they adore,
then share one eyelocked stare,
and suddenly become more.

written 4-27-05

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

© Copyright 2006 Heather Sullivan - All Rights Reserved
bekahlekah45
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since 2006-03-14
Posts 533

1 posted 2006-06-03 11:00 PM


aww i like how this ended!  very cool.  cute too. i like it
buttercupbaby
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since 2006-05-03
Posts 400
outside in the rain
2 posted 2006-06-04 04:29 PM


awww!!the ending is SO good!!i loved it!!honestly..its awesome.
xox
~missy

cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
Posts 442

3 posted 2006-06-04 06:42 PM


Omg this was so cute. I hope we get to hear more from you
Junebug
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since 2006-04-23
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earth
4 posted 2006-06-05 12:18 PM


oomgosh!! this is sooo awesome.....I totally <3 this with like a passion or 10....honestly!!! very awesome and it flowed very well!!

<333~Me

the_girl_next_door
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since 2006-02-26
Posts 591
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5 posted 2006-06-05 12:46 PM


thank you all so much.. I'm glad you enjoyed this.. it is one of my more simple poems but I think it is cute.. I posted two more when I posted this one.. they are a little further downt the page though. if you are interested. thanks though. I really appreciate you taking time to read this.. ~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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