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Teen Poetry #7

my pink floyd

ballajosue
Junior Member

since 2006-06-04

Posts 45
Ca, Us

0 posted 2006-06-04 01:44 AM

I cant tell heaven from hell
i’ve been through both

never trade my heroes for ghosts
ghosts dont have foes.

I would trade a walk on role in the war,
for a lead role in a cage,
just to release my rage
that i believed
in something so fake.

Oh how i wish,
how i wish,
how i wish you were here.

who you are
i dont know
just get here
before its too late
that is my fear.

oh how i wish,
how i wish you were here.

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

1 posted 2006-06-04 05:12 PM

different.. but I think that I understand this.. it was very good.. "my pink floyd' kinda like the band.. it shows that you have a different view on things and a different way of thinking than most.. great job..

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

ballajosue
Junior Member

since 2006-06-04

Posts 45
Ca, Us

2 posted 2006-06-04 09:42 PM

i tried to make it a flow the same as to the actual "wish you were here" pink floyd song, for those of you who might not be familiar the lyrics to that song can be found here : http://www.lyricsondemand.com/p/pinkfloydlyrics/wishyouwereherelyrics.html

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