Teen Poetry #7 |
But When the Night Comes |
Foreverone8783 Junior Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 24Illinios |
Staring out the window As day turns into night She has no strength left For this endless fight Throught the day she holds a fake smile But on the inside she's falling apart Even of you could get through to her She wouldn't even know where to start Her mind is a mess of unforgetable thought Her heart is a mess of unforgetable pain Nobody notices when she just pretends So what good would showing her true feelings gain She feels so alone in this cruel, cold world Her only confort is when the night falls Because in the night no one can see her And she can let down all of her walls She continues to fight so nobody knows But her strength disappears with the sun When the night comes she can no longer smile When the night comes her tears just run Staring out the window As day turns into night She has no strength left For this endless fight *^*Ashley*^* |
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forever*wishing Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 178where my heart is |
i LOVE LOVE LOVE this one! its again really sad, but YES, its really good...you started it with the ending, and wrapped it up perfectly! its amazing. ~L |
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Foreverone8783 Junior Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 24Illinios |
Thanks! |
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