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forever*wishing
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since 2006-05-29
Posts 178
where my heart is

0 posted 2006-06-02 06:16 PM


what else do you want? you're running me dry,
and i know you'd leave if i asked why.
but sometimes it takes too much from me,
just to make you happy.

i do everything in attempt to make you proud,
but you give it back to me, flipped around.
you say i need to be there for you,
but how can i if you keep falling through?

you say im no one, and i dont matter,
but when you need some one, i cant be far,
you say i dont belong,
but when you need a friend, im a rhyme in your song

i cant do everything for you,
unless i matter even when you want something new.

~L

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cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18
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1 posted 2006-06-02 08:20 PM


That poem you wrote is really good. Short, but good!
forever*wishing
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since 2006-05-29
Posts 178
where my heart is
2 posted 2006-06-02 11:58 PM


thanx...ya, i've writen short poems lately...

~L

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