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WaterFairy103
Member

since 2006-05-31

Posts 196

0 posted 2006-06-01 12:52 PM

This would be called an ABC poem...obvious why , I think.Anyway, I really like this one!

Asking questions she's almost ready to answer
Badgering the witness, the defense claims
Callous, hard, the prosecutor glares at her
Daring, strong, she stares pleasantly back
Enticing her with pretty words, getting her to
'Fess up
"Guilty!" he shouts at the twelve people, sitting there
Hearing him yell does nothing to her
Indifferent she'll remain, because she knows
Jealousy burns within her
Knotting her stomach into a snarl
Leaning forward, she finally speaks
Motioning the passionate lawyer closer
Not revealing who did it, who killed the man
Only of her desire, her
Passionate wanting to stop that man's grip on her mind
Quenching her urge to have his blood on her hands
Reality, however, let him get away
Slain by another one of his victims.
Telling them this, that though she should, she
Unfortunately can't take responsibility.
Violently he took her innocence, he took her
Without her consent, and now her heart is
Xeric* and empty
Yearning for the salvation with such
Zeal that I twill finally do her in.

*xeric: desert-like and dry

scyzoryk_o4
Junior Member

since 2006-05-23

Posts 36
Canada and Poland

1 posted 2006-06-01 12:59 PM

Hey again..
I would like to comment on this poem but its way past me to even start.
Honestly your a professional writer right??

bekahlekah45
Senior Member

since 2006-03-14

Posts 533

2 posted 2006-06-01 07:28 AM

this is soooo cool! ive never seen an "ABC" poem!!! haha sweet.

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

3 posted 2006-06-02 12:23 PM

GREAT JOB on this.. it was wonderful.. I agree.. it sounds very professional.. it was great.. keep it up.. I want to hear more..

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

buttercupbaby
Member

since 2006-05-03

Posts 400
outside in the rain

4 posted 2006-06-02 04:04 PM

wow...that is neat!!it would take me a year to do that{ABC poem}!!!sometimes i can't even remember the alphabet sometimes, which would take ever longer!!lol..well, i liked it. its interesting.

xox
-missy
*i love you and im sorry*
mrf

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

5 posted 2006-06-02 06:17 PM

sweeeeet!

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