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Goodbye for now
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Goodbye for now |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533
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Clinging to her shirt I beg her not to leave Running after the car Wishing it to be a dream Breathlessly I give up Tears running down my face Sitting on the side of the road I pray for God's secure embrace Knowing she's gone forever I just can't believe Pondering upon the many things She has helped me achieve Walking back home I begin to smile Knowing she'll be back to vist It just might be awhile : ) haha i know its weird...but i wrote it for my English teacher...I got REALLY close to her and she just moved. But the stuff in the poem didnt relly happen. |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Lol... I was going to say were you really holding onto her shirt?!?! Welcome back bekahlekah45 long time no see. Either that or it's just i've been gone for so long i haven't seen anything?!?! Awesome write though, i'm not sure i would rank this in your top tens on my list, but it made me smile after reading your note. Sorry to hear your teacher moved away, but like the poem says she can always come back and visit you... Great job on this one, it was kind of sad, but very cute too. I hope to see more from you in the near future  @-->--- |
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bekahlekah45 Senior Member
since 2006-03-14
Posts 533 |
thanks stargal : ) i appreciate that. |
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