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Teen Poetry #7

Losing you

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2006-05-20 09:26 PM

No need to tell me again,
What I heard once was enough,
After all this time together,
You want us to part our ways,

Tell me I am dreaming this nightmare,
And that I haven't lost you just yet,
Don't tell that I no longer have any chance,
To make us one like we use to be,

Before you decide to leave me,
And take my heart with you,
I want you to kiss me once more,
Letting me know that you don't skip a beat,

Could I make one last request?
Be with me today, and not think of morrow,
From this point, all I have to look forward to is sorrow,
Don't make me cry this last night I have with you,

My love, how can you love someone else?
And replace me in an instant,
No matter what I do now I've failed,
For I have lost you forever, to no avail.

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

Junebug
Junior Member

since 2006-04-23

Posts 40
earth

1 posted 2006-05-21 04:24 AM

wow! that is totally awesome! i love it! i really liked this part

"Could I make one last request?
Be with me today, and not think of morrow,
From this point, all I have to look forward to is sorrow,
Don't make me cry this last night I have with you"

<3~Donna

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