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Teen Poetry #7

Oh it's Oh so Typical

VintageHollywood
New Member

since 2006-05-19

Posts 4
England

0 posted 2006-05-20 05:22 PM

A trust taken advantage of
Can sometimes lead to disastorous consequences
When you are unable to see between
Reality and a dream

It's not simple
To me it all seemed so real

I put you on the spot
And made you the victim
Instead of me

Oh it's oh so typical of me
To find someone I truly love
And then end up messing it all up

All the hopes and fantasies
Build up in my mind
Just end up getting crushed

Oh it's oh so typical of me
To enter my own world
And come back to the real world
In worse shape than when I left

SarBear
Member

since 2003-06-05

Posts 205
Massachusetts

1 posted 2006-05-20 10:20 PM

I love this! It's very well written and I love the meaning. I've felt that way so many times. it reminds me of a few of my poems!

The Shadow in Blue
Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

2 posted 2006-05-20 10:32 PM

I may say this too much, but this is the kind of poem that invokes what people think and regret sometimes. In other words très magnifique (very beauiful) job. I enjoyed it!

<33
Jill

Sweetie01
Junior Member

since 2006-05-15

Posts 28
NJ, USA

3 posted 2006-05-21 10:59 AM

I loved your poem, it was written very well!
It is the kind of poem that gets people thinking about how they live their life. Anyways, Great Write! Looking forward to more from you!
Amanda<33

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