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Shaking
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Shaking |
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buckysimone Junior Member
since 2003-10-19
Posts 27 |
shaking your hand underneath masks of jesters and lies disillusioned by smiles of youths scents of elderly homes homes to the friends friends of abusive lives living the lives the lives through thick pricket paths dirty tattered jeans rough fingernails runaway paths surrounded mirages of roses finding exits exits never to exist in a life of dirty paper bags cries for help grab my hand my savior shaking your hand underneath |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
im cold.....(this has been a misdirected thought by hatred) |
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duncan idaho Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 70dune |
i hate pretty much every poem on here (especially mine) but this one was very very good. I like your raw style. Keep it up. |
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