The Cold Destruction of My Faith

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Teen Poetry #7

The Cold Destruction of My Faith

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

0 posted 2006-05-15 04:25 PM

A sliver of glass creeps through my soul
circulated by poison through my being
No clarity   as why i hurt myself
forcing myself to dwell in darkness
refusing to indulge in the higher side of life
based on moments of self despise
   buried alive in self hate
             misery
and my own loneliness just to feel
    to rememeber i'm alive
and drinking   to forget   who i am
    the monster i've become
whirling through existence
  destryoing everything beautiful in my life
     cold      apathetic
torn inside out by my own vileness
    with no idea how i ended up this way
Lost to wallow in eternity
   with my own iniquities
burning in my self loathing
           faith destructed

5-14-06

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-partially from " Slave of Love" by: Me.

Sweetpali08
Junior Member

since 2006-05-07

Posts 40

1 posted 2006-05-16 01:57 PM

the monster i've become
whirling through existence
destryoing everything beautiful in my life
cold apathetic
I loved those parts the most...
Keeep it coming...

"How are they the VICTIMS if they are the OCCUPIERS?!"
~Paradise now

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

2 posted 2006-06-11 11:07 PM

thanks for the comment... always appreciate the feedback

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-partially from " Slave of Love" by: Me.

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

3 posted 2006-06-14 10:19 PM

What do I say? what do I always say.. It does me no good to reply to you for I have nothing constructive to say. i love all of your work.. You are a very talented person.. Great job. keep it up.. and post more soon..

~Heather~

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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