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Fabiani Member
since 2006-05-12
Posts 123Mesa, Az 
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this is about the walks i take when im feeling ne strong emotions i walk in fields and along rivers it helps calm me. i wrote this poem about my walks. Where am I going? Am I going in to that night that seemingly endless Dark? Why am I here? Am I here to find something to get somewhere if not? Why am I walking? In witch direction am I heading I think my life is that way But I think it’s this way Ill just take the road less lit by the street lamps I think I might enjoy the tranquil empty void of black that is my end What if someone sees me? Well ill hide ill hide my face at least Ill dream in the vast open stream of my unconsciousness Ill disregard the world and my Emptiness Ill consume my self with my surroundings Try to get her off my mind and run to a place A place in the grass covered knolls A place in the ominous clouds A place where life is in shrouds And my breathe is loud Slip in and out of body and soul Stay in sight of your goal but always out of reach Gently caress the water with the tips of your feet Linger there in the silence of the waves The ripple effect reverberates off your temples Calms your heart and the fluid motions Align with your minds consumption of images and ideas Flowing in correlation with nature With time and space |
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pullingxthextrigger Member
since 2006-05-01
Posts 133MA,..USA llx |
very very nice loved this and i thought i was the only one walks calmed keep it up ~nora<3 your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong llx - P!ATD! |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
awesome write. i like the imagery you used to describe fading in and out and the calming sensations that your surrounding give. Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free |
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