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pullingxthextrigger
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since 2006-05-01
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MA,..USA llx

0 posted 2006-05-12 04:34 PM


My Ocean of Emotions

Im drowning in a sea of hate
No more love left to share
Is this my fate?
And do you even care?

I cry myself to sleep at night
theres always something wrong
hoping for my life to be alright
i know i have to stay strong

Look closly into my eyes
past the grayish color and lies
and then you'll realize
i have no compromise

My bleeding heart
is filled with an unexplainable emotion
always from the start
cant be healed with a single motion

I know its not depression
Cause i dont feel like commiting suicide
but whats killing me is the tension
that i have to run away and hide

My sea of hate grew
its now some water of emotions
its color changed; its not blue
now its a huge black ocean

Black with my fears
with all my history
Black with my tears
this isnt a mystery

I fear that this big ocean
will have high tide
and the land gets taken by my emotions
while i slowly die inside


~nora<3

your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong llx - P!ATD!

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themute
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since 2006-05-08
Posts 469
Maryland
1 posted 2006-05-12 08:48 PM


Think of it this way, if your sadness is the polar ice caps, your way of seeing the world is the O-zone, and your experiences in life is the sun. Then you should have a view of the world that lets less solar rays penitrate the O-zone making it hotter and melting the ice making your world consumed with sadness. positive views=positive life. Trust Me.


pullingxthextrigger
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since 2006-05-01
Posts 133
MA,..USA llx
2 posted 2006-05-12 09:42 PM


thx for the science lesson
and yea ur right about the postive views
thx for replying

~nora<3

your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong llx - P!ATD!

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