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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
Kevin I know this feeling, I know it isn’t normal, I know it’s something special It’s something that takes all my worries away. It’s something that takes my breathe away It makes my heart beat faster and faster, in such a mesmerizing way Nobody can ever take it away. It’s a feeling so true, So right, So real. It’s a feeling that only you can give to me. Only you can let it be. You, you, you… It’s everything I ever wanted, It’s everything I ever needed, Baby, it’s you… (this poem is about my bf kevin yay..lol..) |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hey curiouse, Great write on this, i know that i say that a lot, but it's true never the less. I'm not really going to give any critiques on this, because their you're emotions about someone you love, it's kind of sacred ground to me. I know i might have done that on other poems, but sometimes it is hard to seperate fantasy from reality  I loved seeing another one of your poems, it has been awhile, i'm hoping to see more soon also! Right now i've got to run, but i just wanted to say great poem @-->--- |
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pullingxthextrigger Member
since 2006-05-01
Posts 133MA,..USA llx |
that was awesome!!! hope your bf likes it he should be glad to have a gf as talented as you ~nora<3 your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong llx - P!ATD! |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
i really like this. I just hooked up with my best friend, he is my everything. Well at least he was when we were friends,but we're still friends. Even though we now have a relationship. This just reminded me of me and him. Good write. Keep it up! Courtney |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
cool..thanks guys..and yes he loved the poem..which is always good..lol.. well nothing more i can say but thankyou and i am so in looove..lol seeya, curiouse i'm looking for you...always... |
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