Dead end! - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

0 posted 2006-02-02 04:10 PM

Holding on to something,
that has already gone,
wishing i could fix,
whatever it was that went wrong,

lying in my bed,
with tears rolling down my face,
thinking about an empty space,
just wanting it to go away,
but knowing it is here to stay,

i am running in my mind down an empty road and am getting cold,
looking around me and seeing there is no one to hold,
i stop and wonder why everyone goes on,
like nothing happened,
like nothing matters,
and thinking that im the only one that has shattered,

my door is shut im all alone,
no one understands,
no on knows,
no one left to hold my hand,
knowing that this is the end,
knowing that there are no more bends,
i can stop running now,
that i have finally hit the dead end!!!

XxnoraxX
Member

since 2006-01-24

Posts 122
<3 MA,,,USA <3

1 posted 2006-02-02 05:04 PM

awesome poem and so true. I hate when parents just forget what being a teen is like and when your in your room they think your all right but your not. excellant

XxnoraxX

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

2 posted 2006-02-02 05:24 PM

Oh thank you. Im sooo GLAD you understand

x0x0
Free_Spirit07

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

3 posted 2006-03-18 09:53 PM

your poem reminds me of a similar life that i know. Its rugh but you'll get thruogh it i know you will
Courtney

you might have scars all over your body, but what about the ones engraved in your memories.

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2006-03-19 12:11 PM

Woah, amazing write! I can really relate to this one.
The last stanza was my favorite. Keep posting!!

~Alli~

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

5 posted 2006-03-19 09:46 PM

I loved this.. the whole poem seemed to build up til the last stanza 'dead end' and that's how it seemed. I read it like I couldn't control the speed and then at the end it was just a complete stop.. great finish..

~Heather

helenadepp
Member

since 2006-01-16

Posts 59
durham, england

6 posted 2006-03-21 01:14 PM

This sums up how a lot of teenagers feel. Great write!

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

7 posted 2006-04-20 07:46 PM

Hey this was a reallly good poem that reminded me of alot that went on with my life just in the few years that i moved on this street.
I realize what you are going through.

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

8 posted 2006-04-20 07:46 PM

Hey this was a reallly good poem that reminded me of alot that went on with my life just in the few years that i moved on this street.
I realize what you are going through.

pullingxthextrigger
Member

since 2006-05-01

Posts 133
MA,..USA llx

9 posted 2006-05-11 10:40 PM

FREE!!! I HAVENT TALKED TO YOU IN AGES!!! ITS ME XXNORAXX!! anyways, this poem was so great i had to come back and comment on it again
keep it up

~nora<3

your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong llx - P!ATD!

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.