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poise_and_rationality
Junior Member
since 2006-05-06
Posts 46
my mind

0 posted 2006-05-06 03:30 PM


its sat btw long story anyways enjoy xparx

A little girl at school
Alone with no friends
Her hair in two braids
With pink bows at the ends.

Everyone wonders
But don't dare to ask
Nobody knows
What's behind the mask.

Even if they did
She could never tell
How her life at home
Is a living hell.

Her family at home
Is a battle she'll lose
Between the drinking and drugs
And all the abuse

No one at school
Even has a clue
Why this girl arrives every day
Bleeding black and blue

She's just a lonely girl
With tears in her eyes
Nobody to listen
Or hear her silent cries.

house of compusure where is your posture?

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pullingxthextrigger
Member
since 2006-05-01
Posts 133
MA,..USA llx
1 posted 2006-05-06 11:08 PM


AWESOME POEM!!!!!  I LOVED IT SO MUCH!!!
nothin left to say except woah
keep up the GREAT work


~nora<3

your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong llx - P!ATD!

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591
USA
2 posted 2006-05-06 11:35 PM


"WOW" I loved it.. this was a great poem.. but so true in a lot of cases.. keep up the good work..

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

pullingxthextrigger
Member
since 2006-05-01
Posts 133
MA,..USA llx
3 posted 2006-05-07 01:38 AM


ooooo now i get it!!! ur sins_and_tradgies
im so dumb  k happy ur still here bye4now


~nora<3

your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong llx - P!ATD!

Junebug
Junior Member
since 2006-04-23
Posts 40
earth
4 posted 2006-05-07 05:07 AM


in my words of the day HECK YES! lol but this poem like...totally rocked i cant even explain it well enough! its so like...deap...and totally awesome!
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