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oh_my_goshijustgotexcited
Member

since 2006-07-12

Posts 52
USA, IDAHO

0 posted 2006-07-12 12:31 PM

Sinking

Reaching for your love
Gasping for my breath
Heavy with the scent of pain
Always running from complications
Never Realizing the truth
I'm here for you, if you could only see
Past your broken bloodied heart

Walking along the waters edge
Looking deep beneath the waves
I see your face looking up towards mine
Your eyes shine with tears
trying to pull you out
i sink into your dark eyes...your eyes

Sinking, sinking deeper i go
i cant cut this hold i have
tried loving someone else
but you keep coming up for breath
i wanna push you away into the depths

We're finally outta this cold mess
saying we'll just be friends
trying to make amends
we think its for the best
but i know i will need a breath of you
because im sinking all over again

Sinking, sinking deep i go
i cant cut this hold i have
tried loving someone else
but you keep coming up for breath
i wanna push you away into the depths

After the pain of you goes away
i wont ever love again
because...i was

Sinking for you, deeper i went
i didnt cut the hold i had
never able to love anyone else
you kept coming up for breath
and i pushed you into the depths
and now you are gone forever

sinking, sinking
only for you!

The one, The only, Viola

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

1 posted 2006-07-12 01:05 AM

Hey oh_my_goshijustgotexcited,

Welcome to piptalk! It's always nice to see a new face joining. I hope you enjoy the site as much as I have.

Very nice... song? I kind of think it could be either song or poem. Your choice on it.
I really liked it though, and if ever you have a site where we can listen to you sing it I'd love to hear it!

Thanks for sharing, I can't wait to see what else you have in store

@-->---

Ringo

Member Elite

since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

2 posted 2006-07-12 01:30 PM

WELOCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please check your e-mail for a special greeting.

You may burn my flag... only after you wrap yourself in it first.
www.myspace.com/mindlesspoet

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

3 posted 2006-07-12 05:45 PM

WELCOME TO PIPTALK. i loved your first post.. great job.. it does sounds kind of like a song.

~heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

4 posted 2006-07-15 01:47 AM

i usually cant read longer poems but yours just pulled me in i am lookin forward to more poems from you that paint pictures like this one did

laura
welcome to pip

M e m o r i e s
Junior Member

since 2006-07-15

Posts 14
Alaska, USA

5 posted 2006-07-15 07:51 PM

Hiiii! *my mindless, but meaningful, greeting*

I wuffed this! (yes wuffed, in my world saying I 'wuf' something is better than saying I 'love' something.) This was really nice! And, one day, you should really make this a song! I can dance to it all night long! Yay! But, it's a good poem too! So, here, have a cookie! *hands you cookie*

Wuffed the poem!

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

6 posted 2006-07-21 11:22 AM

welcome to pip hope you like it here great poem i really know this feeling well! hope to see more from you!

hi my name is robin and i am addicted to poetry and men!
"and we'll all float on ok....." - modest mouse
aim - reklesabandnrckr
groove on sista!

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