Pain comes from thee (repost, sort of)

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Pain comes from thee (repost, sort of)

aliway
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since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

0 posted 2006-05-02 04:48 PM

With in my eyes I can’t describe
My feeling that will never die
Sorrow grows where hope once flowed
Pain of thee with misery to be
Sadness crashing, tears come free
Faith let go, lost from the unknown

Oh your darkness that surrounds me
Let my hatred free so I may have serenity
But neither hope nor great relief comes to me
Seeing thee dismayed falling in to a sea of despair
Only pain remands where you have touched my soul
Nothing will change thy feelings will remain

>if you want to see the first one you can go to Open poetry.
or /pip/Forum94/HTML/003211.html

[This message has been edited by aliway (05-02-2006 11:50 PM).]

pullingxthextrigger
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since 2006-05-01

Posts 133
MA,..USA llx

1 posted 2006-05-02 05:43 PM

that was awesome!!! great write!!!

~nora <3

your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong </3 llx - Panic!At The Disco! **Time To Dance**

aliway
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since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

2 posted 2006-05-02 08:50 PM

thank you pullingxthextrigger for the post. you're the first to post on this one from both areas, thank you!!

*Leah

[This message has been edited by aliway (05-02-2006 11:58 PM).]

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