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pullingxthextrigger
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since 2006-05-01

Posts 133
MA,..USA llx

0 posted 2006-05-01 11:11 PM

I want to die

Why am I feeling this way?
Its my life and I should have a say

I feel as though no one cares
I feel as if im locked up, crying-while everyone stares

Help me please escape this
I want the life I miss

Depression’s probably what I feel
I cant eat a single meal

I want to die
The pain and pressure’s way to high

Help me through
I need you

My screams at night are an echo
But you probably know

When I scream your name out
I never hear you shout

I know that your not coming back
I need to be put back on the rack

<3
~nora

your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong </3 llx - Panic!At The Disco!

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

1 posted 2006-05-02 08:39 AM

Hey,

This is a very sad poem, it has so many emotions flowing through.

I'm not really sure what I should write, because if you really want to die, well... but if it's just a subject idea, than....
Yah, could you tell me what made you write this? Unless that's to personal.

Maybe i can offer a better input after i get an idea of where you're coming from.
Till than i think i won't offer any comments, except that this WAS/IS a good write.

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pullingxthextrigger
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since 2006-05-01

Posts 133
MA,..USA llx

2 posted 2006-05-02 03:30 PM

lol no i dont want to die
i just wrote this poem for no real reason
thx for replying luv hearing from you

~nora <3

your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong </3 llx - Panic!At The Disco! **Time To Dance**

pullingxthextrigger
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since 2006-05-01

Posts 133
MA,..USA llx

3 posted 2006-05-02 05:42 PM

k well i got so much inspiration, if u could call it that, from other poems about death, depression, and all those negatives that i just felt like writing this---that probably didnt make any sense but at least u know what gave me the idea

~nora <3

your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong </3 llx - Panic!At The Disco! **Time To Dance**

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

4 posted 2006-05-02 05:59 PM

Okay, yes i do understand that, i do that also. Like i will read some awesome poems on here and want to try my hand at the subject...

Like i said, great write, there's not much i can add to that

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pullingxthextrigger
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since 2006-05-01

Posts 133
MA,..USA llx

5 posted 2006-05-02 06:01 PM

lol thx--glad u understand! thx for the reply

~nora <3

your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong </3 llx - P!ATD!

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