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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
Whats your poison? Is it a liquid or a gas? a powder, a solid? How long does it last? Intoxicated, I feel so violated as the poison, The poison of my choice, overpowers, and smothers my voice. Nobody hears, as the poison flows free. Nobody cares, as it slowly kills me. Yet still... we do this willingly. I ask why, but in my mind, |
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pullingxthextrigger Member
since 2006-05-01
Posts 133MA,..USA llx |
Nobody hears, as the poison flows free. Nobody cares, as it slowly kills me. ahhhhh i luv that!!!! awesome poem keep up the GREAT work! <3 ~nora your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong </3 llx - Panic!At The Disco! |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Wow.. I love this one! It has got to be one of my favorites from you, it is going in my library  I really, really, like the first stanza, " Whats your poison? Is it a liquid or a gas? a powder, a solid? How long does it last?" it has so much said in just a few words, very powerful. Good write on this one @-->--- |
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tearsoflove13762 Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 488Texas.. and yes i have an accent |
wow this can be interpreted in so many ways its a great write thanks for sharing SENIOR 06' |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
"we do this willingly" this is my favorite one line out of the whole poem.. it was a great way to end the poem and it set the whole thing off and it's so true.. the first stanza was my favorite stanza but this whole poem was amazing.. ~Heather Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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