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Distant Thoughts |
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Spine Grinder Senior Member
since 2000-10-28
Posts 1127Standing In Silence... |
Argument after argument, Will it ever end? Some say, Once you love someone, It’s forever. Do you believe that? Or was it all a lie? A cover-up – To once again, Twist me around your finger? Pillow soaked – By these nightly tears, No sleep again tonight, My mind is too afraid… Because your face still Haunts me in my dreams… "I'm tired of being what you want me to be."~Linkin Park |
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young_blood Senior Member
since 2003-09-19
Posts 1115Indianapolis, IN |
this was ok. ive read alot of poems that are the same idea as this. it wasnt bad at all, it was just kinda mediocre. |
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Olive_8 Junior Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 41Canada |
Dude I totally loved your poem!! I can definitely relate. When I read it, it totally hit me, made me realize that sometimes things just don't work and we needa move past them, no matter how hard it seems at the time. |
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sunshinemc Junior Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 27 |
Good write. I can relate definetely. <3 sunshinemc |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Staci...some painful emotions in this, but you've expressed them very well. Nicely done. ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
OMG, Staci, that was amazing. It couldn't have hit closer to home. I loved it, as I do all of your writing. Awesome...Loves. "I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..." |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
hmmm, true true. |
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