Teen Poetry #7 |
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BabieDoll Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 268BFE |
You understand me. Not the pretend "understanding" but the genuine kind; the kind that sets my heart on fire with the need to understand you as well. You value my intellect and the fact that I speak my mind, even if no one else will listen. But I know you will. You respect me on a higher level than most people I've known for years. You tell me the truth, but you know when I need to hear you lie. You try hard to see my point of view; to walk in my shoes, attempting to see what is inside my heart and soul. Even if it kills you inside, I know you only want me to be happy. But you only understand certain aspects. I've faced trials, fought to overcome; sometimes I don't understand myself. In these dark hours, though, when I'm feeling helpless and alone, you always seem to know just how to save me.* **To fear love is to fear life, and those who fear life are already three parts dead.** |
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peachesNcream Senior Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 513Ocean Of Tears |
Oooooooo!!!! I like! Haha. This was REALLY good. For some reason, this came off as amazing to me! LOL. Great work, hun! ~Jess "Some of us think holding on makes us strong; but sometimes it is letting go." -Herman Hesse |
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Olive_8 Junior Member
since 2003-09-20
Posts 41Canada |
One word, AMAZING!!! |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
That was beautiful. I'm adding you to my library. Thanks for a wodnerful read. Just wanna be funny,looks like the joke's on me. |
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SilentTears Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 371Lost and Broken |
I read this before...and it was just as touching the first time I read it. Beautiful...Loves. "I would sleep forever, if it meant I'd never stop dreaming..." |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
ha ha (i laugh like french man) good write. |
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