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I wish i could show how many times I've cried...
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I wish i could show how many times I've cried... |
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acid_tears_i_cry Junior Member
since 2005-11-25
Posts 24United States, UT |
Blinded and naive I was a fool. I still feel ur touch sometimes. I miss u, do u miss me too? I laughed till I cried, I seemed so happy on the outside of the lies. I only laughed to keep from crying,...MY heart isnt showing its lies Im so tired of not being able to have u to hold me, I hate not being able to be in ur arms. its all ruined now, its all just over, just like that, I was so busy laughing now Im crying... I knew from the start you were the one, even without a kiss u were so much fun. I didnt know what real loves was, all the hits u gave should have been hugs...How was I to know it at the time...I was so busy laughing now Im crying...I still love u...Im sorry... Dedicated to: Isaac Walker. By: Malinda Peterson. Can you read the word "loneliness" and not think of a dark room? |
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sins_and_tragedies Junior Member
since 2006-04-26
Posts 41england |
hey  i really really like this poem i can relate to it please write more....danielle x is good to face these things with a sense of poise and rationality [This message has been edited by sins_and_tragedies (04-28-2006 03:47 PM).] |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Hey, This is such a sad poem... I liked it a lot though because it expressed you, and your emotions, nothing phony or fake. Good job on this! @-->--- |
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