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sins_and_tragedies Junior Member
since 2006-04-26
Posts 41england |
Could you be the one for me? Could you be my find? Could it be, after all this time, Fate is going to be kind? Could you be the one for me, The one to help me forget The man that broke my heart, my soul The man that haunts me yet? You tell me that I'm beautiful Something I've never heard But the one still lives here in my mind That couldn't spare a kind word It's going to be hard to forget And pick up the pieces he left Could you be the one to teach How to love again and forget? Could you be the one to come And mend my broken heart? Are you willing to piece together What another broke apart? It won't be an easy job, you see My road has been long and rough And the heart that was once so soft Is now shut, locked, and tough But I can feel my heart open again It's opening for you Just come in, and love me back That's all you have to do I must ask you one small thing Before we kiss and part Please be nice and kind to me I'm tired of broken hearts is good to face this things with a sense of poise and rationality |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
I loved this poem.. If you don't mind me asking have you is this the first time you posted this anywhere on the internet or is it on another sight? when did you sit down and write this? ~Heather Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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sins_and_tragedies Junior Member
since 2006-04-26
Posts 41england |
i sat down i wrote this i relate my poems to past experiences especially my last boyfriend who lasted a year and a bit....that was the first time i placed it on the internet...im glad you liked it.. danielle x is good to face this things with a sense of poise and rationality |
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