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sins_and_tragedies Junior Member
since 2006-04-26
Posts 41england |
Born from silence, silence full of it A perfect concert my best friend So much to live for, so much to die for If only my heart had a home Sing what you can't say Forget what you can't play Hasten to drown into beautiful eyes Walk within my poetry, this dying music - My loveletter to nobody Never sigh for better world It's already composed, played and told Every thought the music I write Everything a wish for the night Wrote for the eclipse, wrote for the virgin Died for the beauty the one in the garden Created a kingdom, reached for the wisdom Failed in becoming a god Never sigh for better world It's already composed, played and told Every thought the music I write Everything a wish for the night Teach me passion for I fear it's gone Show me love, hold the lorn So much more I wanted to give to the ones who love me I'm sorry Time will tell this bitter farewell I live no more to shame nor me nor you And you... I wish I didn't feel for you anymore... A lonely soul... An ocean soul... |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
First i would like to applaud you. This was absolutely awesome! "Walk within my poetry, this dying music - My loveletter to nobody Wrote for the eclipse, wrote for the virgin Died for the beauty the one in the garden Created a kingdom, reached for the wisdom Failed in becoming a god" these lines in particular gave me shivers. Awesome piece, welcome to my library with this one lol good job Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
First i would like to applaud you. This was absolutely awesome! "Walk within my poetry, this dying music - My loveletter to nobody Wrote for the eclipse, wrote for the virgin Died for the beauty the one in the garden Created a kingdom, reached for the wisdom Failed in becoming a god" these lines in particular gave me shivers. Awesome piece, welcome to my library with this one lol good job Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Wow... This poem is so amazing! The words, the imagery, the thoughts, everything holds you spell bound in this, from the moment you start to read to the moment you stop... My particular favorite part of this poem would have to be, "Sing what you can't say Forget what you can't play" that and also the first stanza, both parts amazing and unique! Great job on this  @-->--- |
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the_girl_next_door Senior Member
since 2006-02-26
Posts 591USA |
wow... going in my library... I loved all of it.. everything in this was amazing.. you have talent.. and you put plenty of emotion in your poetry.. "love letter to nobody" again. wow! ~Heather  Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes. |
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