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sins_and_tragedies
Junior Member

since 2006-04-26

Posts 41
england

0 posted 2006-04-30 02:34 PM

fallen angels were to hide their wings,
And come on down to earth,
Wander round among us,
As if of equal worth,
Would we abuse them in the street,
If we thought they looked like geeks?
Would we torment them when in school,
All because we wanted to look cool?

By my reckoning yes we would,
You may deny it but I know you could,
Think about it, if you did not know,
That fat kid in tears had just dropped to here below,
You could be the one to make them cry,
Only to realise when you die,
And float up to that pearly gate,
That St Peter was that fat kid's mate,
He'll refuse you entry you know,
Then you'll be heading to hell below,
And I'm sure then you'll regret being so cruel,
To that fat kid, back in school.
danielle
x

is good to face this things with a sense of poise and rationality

[This message has been edited by sins_and_tragedies (05-01-2006 05:58 AM).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2006-04-30 04:08 PM

a good write, D...but you don't have to say please read...sometimes that puts people off...most of us try to read a little of everyone.

M

Junebug
Junior Member

since 2006-04-23

Posts 40
earth

2 posted 2006-04-30 06:23 PM

aw this poem rocks! and its totally true! i love this one!
<3~Me

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2006-04-30 10:14 PM

Hey,

I also thought this was a really cool poem, the only thing i don't understand is the "f" at the start, were you maybe trying to say fallen angels, or was that just a mistake?

Also, like the other person said, you don't have to put the "please please read", i know that sometimes we are all a little slow in replying, but if you just wait i know someone will! Or, at least I will try too, i know i've been slacking on that lately though...

This was a great poem, i think i might add it to my library if that's alright with you?
I'm not really sure what my favorite part is, it is all so very good!

Hope to see more like this, i enjoyed it a lot

@-->---

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

4 posted 2006-04-30 10:21 PM

i liked this a lot.. and it's very true. I think the f at the beginning is supposed to be "if"
if i'm not mistaken. lol.. but i could be wrong.. like the others said.. everyone on here should try to read and reply to topics even if it's a slow process because I myself am a very impatient person.. keep it up..

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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