Teen Poetry #7 |
Why did you say you loved me? |
aliway Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 185With in your eyes |
All my life all my might Wasted on the endless night I’m to weak to breath To weak the see that you where reaching out for me I never know you liked me so as more then just a friend Now it’s to late you’ve moved away Leaving me with this endless gap After saying you love me And walking away I never know I could loss so much Holding your picture with all my might The one you gave me on my 15th birthday Now I’m hoping and wishing you will come back to me But when you never looked back My heart gave way Knowing there’s no you and me Now I’m left with only monomers of a friendship and what could have been now I’m left in the dark with in the night I was working for There is so much good in the worst of us, and so much bad in the best of us, that it |
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Junebug Junior Member
since 2006-04-23
Posts 40earth |
ok it didnt really ryme...but i love it!! i like completely get it and i know the feeling...you like wrote down my feelings..that rocks!! its totally awesome!! <3~Me! |
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Tempest Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247dont eat paint chips!!!! |
That was pretty good. I liked it alot it was really cool because it really put down how you feel and i could feel the intensity. |
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