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Teen Poetry #7

a love between a friend

sins_and_tragedies
Junior Member

since 2006-04-26

Posts 41
england

0 posted 2006-04-26 04:20 PM

I got your back
You got mine,
I'll help you out
Anytime.
To see you hurt
To see you cry,
Makes me weep
And wanna die.
And if you agree
To never fight,
It wouldn't matter
Who's wrong or right.
If a broken heart
Needs a mend,
I'll be right there
To the end.
If your cheeks are wet
From drops of tears,
Don't you worry,
Let go of your fears.
Hand in hand
Love is sent,
We'll be friends
Till the end

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

1 posted 2006-04-26 11:04 PM

Wow, this is such a good poem, the flow in this is awesome! It has only one place where i felt like it went off and that would be, "If your cheeks are wet
From drops of tears", that could just be me though.

If i had to choose a favorite part in this i would say it is the first 4 lines! That part just really speaks to me on how, umm, relationships(?) should be...

Good job, I haven't seen you here before so welcome to pip,and I hope to see more from you

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Junebug
Junior Member

since 2006-04-23

Posts 40
earth

2 posted 2006-04-27 01:48 AM

dude this poem is awesome..and it flows like perfect! and i think its kool how you made a poem for a friend! thats so kool but ya the poem rocks!

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