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A love so deep
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A love so deep |
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blitz Junior Member
since 2006-04-26
Posts 19 |
tears fall down my cheeks as i start to think i know i lost you i know you cared but the only thing i desire to to be near you i swear i will be at your side and never leave so long as i live and its for the thought of seeing you again that i stay focused I'll tell you know my heart aches as you shake i want to hold you tight but i cant not even during the dead of night i watched you cry as you tell me not to Sure tears fill your eyes and your praying it was lies i look away hiding my tears never showing my tears you beg and plead with me not to go but i cant hold on not any more i lean to you for a kiss you cry and i tell you how much i will miss and how much i will love you even though i am gone. |
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sins_and_tragedies Junior Member
since 2006-04-26
Posts 41england |
omg smiles, that was absolutly wicked i really really liked that one  i thought about as i read it how real it was it was like my mind was being read on how i felt well done x |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
Omgosh! This was an awesome poem, i loved the whole thing. You had like one error i think, where in the poem it says, "to to", i don't know if you saw that or not... I think stanzas would be kewl in this also, but to each his/her own. Btw, Welcome to pip also! I can't wait to see more of your posts  @-->--- |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
hey blitz, fria here.i am so glad you joined and a fantastic poem you decided to post. yay, welcome and keep posting! smiles, me! i'm looking for you...always... |
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