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Logan and Fria
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Logan and Fria |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
Logan and Fria It was by chance that we came across each other. Just happened to be at the right place at the right time. Wanting to make conversation with one another, You came and sat and we started to chat. You started talking to me. With you I felt as though I could be free. We talked about each others life, How it is such strife. You told me, you really liked someone. I said you should tell her how you feel. And you did! You told me how being with me seemed so right, so real. Declared, or shouted should I say, your undying love for me. I was as happy as could be. Every other minute you would inform me of your fondness, And i can not believe you were love-less, friendless. But how could such a great personality be so lonely? Shine your personality and you won’t be lonely, For you now have me. With whom you can be free. Forever ... together i'm looking for you...always... |
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aliway Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 185With in your eyes |
Oh my god… this poem is great… wonderful, I was so happy after reading it Love reading your stuff *leah |
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stargal Senior Member
since 2006-03-06
Posts 1352OR USA |
This is very beautiful! I didn't think it was one of your bests though, but i loved the general idea. The idea is what makes me enjoy this one so much, plus the part where it makes you wonder who he/she likes! Keeps you guessing... Good job, hope to see more  @-->--- |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
thankyou for your comments, much appreciated, smiles, me! i'm looking for you...always... |
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