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kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

0 posted 2006-04-22 05:08 AM

nightmares come
nightmares go.
just like the wind
that doesnt always blow.
my life is put
on hold.
for what you ask?
i do not know.
for love?
for hate?
to resolve my fate?
it isnt that simple.
it isnt that slow.
this feeling i get....
ive never had it before.

eh. i dont like this one so much.

Junebug
Junior Member

since 2006-04-23

Posts 40
earth

1 posted 2006-04-23 01:05 AM

I Do!! the words are awesome! it rocks in my opinion!

tearsoflove13762
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 488
Texas.. and yes i have an accent

2 posted 2006-04-24 01:20 AM

the meaning and most of the wording works but some rearranging and changing of words is what it needs

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

3 posted 2006-05-01 03:04 PM

Hey,

I disagree, i don't think there needs to be any moving around of words, or lines.

I felt like this had great flow, except for the last line, something about that just didn't go over smoothly with me...

Great poem though, i know i enjoyed reading it, thinking about it, maybe even reading more into this than what you meant to be put in it... all well

Keep up the good writes

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pullingxthextrigger
Member

since 2006-05-01

Posts 133
MA,..USA llx

4 posted 2006-05-01 05:59 PM

nightmares come
nightmares go.
just like the wind
that doesnt always blow.

fave stanza..this poem is great! loved it short n' sweet <3 keep up the great work!

Mick Hawkes
Member

since 2000-10-26

Posts 90
Tees-side , England

5 posted 2006-06-13 07:24 PM

I Liked this ...

Never take life too seriously - None of us gets out alive!

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

6 posted 2006-06-16 03:15 AM

i like this its reallt relative!
ooh haven't spoken to u in ages!
your writing is still as great

i havent been able to write in ages

ohwell im here to try again! damn writers block

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

girlskater117
Junior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 32

7 posted 2006-06-16 09:01 AM

I like it alot. I hope u read mine but u don't have too

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