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Teen Poetry #7

Falling in Love

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

0 posted 2006-04-19 10:24 PM

My eyes became heavy,
my legs became weak.
I could not move.
I could not speak.

Your words ran through my mind.
Your face smiled in my head.
I tried to hear your words,
but I couldn't make out what you said.

This dream that I was dreaming
was just another case of kiss and tell.
It was everything I wanted,
but soon turned into a living hell.

Your sweet and caring charm
made me fall in too deep.
I think I'm falling for someone
that I know I can't keep.

Some of the words you said
made me think twice about this sitiuation,
but when you said that you couldn't fall in love,
I hoped it was only my imagination.

Written 11-22-04

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

latteaddict213

Senior Member

since 2006-02-17

Posts 523
Colorado

1 posted 2006-04-19 11:07 PM

It flows really well. Probaly the best flow of all the poems I've read today. No offence to any of the other writers. You really expressed the meaning or at least what I thought the was the meaning. Nice write.

Jessica

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

2 posted 2006-04-19 11:16 PM

thank you so much Jessica..

~Heather

Desire nothing except desirelessness. Hope for nothing except to rise above all hopes.
Want nothing & you will have everything.

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