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the_hoodANDsheild
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since 2006-03-08
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Canada

0 posted 2006-04-16 12:19 PM


~Love is the fire on my bedroom floor
Two choices- stay or run out the door~

To run away is to fall.
To run away from possibility even if it is small.
This would make me sick.
My heart would die all too quick.

Possibility, chance, and hope
This can be a slippery slope.
But we must take the chance,
Because to die is to lose romance.

So I will never let myself fall higher,
I will always choose the fire.
Even if I am burned,
Then a broken heart is something I earned.

~So now ask yourself~

Will you face the fire?
Or will you become a fake liar?
Will you take a run down the hall?
Because I know I’d rather burn then fall.


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I hope this makes sense and gives you something to think about.


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electricxheart
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since 2004-09-05
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far away from home.
1 posted 2006-04-16 08:56 AM


wow! this was really awesome. the whole
idea of it...so creative. i love it.
plus the whole poem flows really well
with the rhyming and what not.

keep writing!!
-kelly

curiouse
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since 2006-03-21
Posts 277
england
2 posted 2006-04-16 12:38 PM


yes this is a fantastic idea and i guess i would rather burn than fall anytime.
i loved the flow of the poem, you do have a talent.
curiouse

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the_hoodANDsheild
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3 posted 2006-04-16 01:31 PM


Great i am glad this makes sense and you are enjoying it
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4 posted 2006-04-16 09:53 PM


It made plenty of sense. It flows very well. Really creative with rhyming. Bravo.

           Jessica

aliway
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since 2006-03-05
Posts 185
With in your eyes
5 posted 2006-04-19 11:10 PM


I get it.
I don’t know what to say but I really like it.

*Leah

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