Teen Poetry #7 |
I’d Rather BURN then FALL |
the_hoodANDsheild Junior Member
since 2006-03-08
Posts 25Canada |
~Love is the fire on my bedroom floor Two choices- stay or run out the door~ To run away is to fall. To run away from possibility even if it is small. This would make me sick. My heart would die all too quick. Possibility, chance, and hope This can be a slippery slope. But we must take the chance, Because to die is to lose romance. So I will never let myself fall higher, I will always choose the fire. Even if I am burned, Then a broken heart is something I earned. ~So now ask yourself~ Will you face the fire? Or will you become a fake liar? Will you take a run down the hall? Because I know I’d rather burn then fall. -------------------------------------------------- I hope this makes sense and gives you something to think about. |
||
© Copyright 2006 the_hoodANDsheild - All Rights Reserved | |||
electricxheart Member
since 2004-09-05
Posts 184far away from home. |
wow! this was really awesome. the whole idea of it...so creative. i love it. plus the whole poem flows really well with the rhyming and what not. keep writing!! -kelly |
||
curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
yes this is a fantastic idea and i guess i would rather burn than fall anytime. i loved the flow of the poem, you do have a talent. curiouse i'm looking for you...always... |
||
the_hoodANDsheild Junior Member
since 2006-03-08
Posts 25Canada |
Great i am glad this makes sense and you are enjoying it |
||
latteaddict213
since 2006-02-17
Posts 523Colorado |
It made plenty of sense. It flows very well. Really creative with rhyming. Bravo. Jessica |
||
aliway Member
since 2006-03-05
Posts 185With in your eyes |
I get it. I don’t know what to say but I really like it. *Leah |
||
⇧ top of page ⇧ | ||
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. |